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Monday 4 November 2013

Ritua's Test Narrtive Writing

Once there were people living at a farm they are the Leo family. John was the the dad he was the boss. He loved to race his tractor around the farm. Jane was the mother and she had a huge job looking after their kid’s. Mary, Johnny were the kid’s. The leo family had dinner last night.  

Last night the animals had an important meeting about the humans. The cow said I’m sick of tired of giving my milk and wasting it. The pig said I’m sick of tired seeing my friend getting cooked and eaten. So one of the cows got an idea, I got an idea said the cow we should sneak inside the house and get the keys.



We put the humans in one of our cages and locked them in.That will teach them a lesson, so the cow and pig sneak inside of the house and taken the keys and tooked the humans in one of their cages in the middle of the night. So they took the keys and the humans in the cages and locked them inside.



In the morning the humans woke up and John was awake. But not the kids and mum, John said where are we, Mary and Johnny waked up and jane waked up to.Mary and Johnny said where are we, Jane said we are in the cages. So the animals had taken over the farm. The humans said get us out of here, then the cow came outside and said that will teach you a lesson. The cow dropped the keys on the floor, then Mary got an idea she got a long stick and she got the keys and the humans escaped.     

                                                                     The End

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