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Thursday 13 June 2013

Land of the Dinosaur's

Once there was four kid’s going for and adventure they saw a giant dragonfly I don’t like this adventure said Nadine. Chip found a footprint biff took a photograph of Chip and Nadine I will take this photograph at school she said. Nadine found some egg’s they were big egg’s it must be a dinosaur egg’s he said. One of the egg began to crack it was going to hatch out. suddenly something came flying the children was frighted what is it asked chip I don’t know said biff. The children ran it’s a flying dinosaur Nadine and it’s a big one come on let’s hide. The flying dinosaur flew down to the baby dinosaur it pick up the little dinosaur it pick up with his teeth. oh no said biff that dinosaur is going to eat the baby dinosaur she picked up a stick and yelled at the dinosaur go away she yelled. The dinosaur flew away then chip was cross with biff you were silly he had It could have got you. Wilf ran and climbed the big hill He wanted to look for a apatosaurus come up here biff take a photograph. Wlif had not climbed on a hill he had climbed on a dinosaur and it was enormous

2 comments:

  1. really good short story Ritua, keep it up.

    papa.

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  2. Ritua good that the story writing is improving there are bit and pieces left to straighten up in you sentences. Keep up the good work Baby, try hard.

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